First Draft

This is my first draft. I am waiting for your comments.

It was a month before my high school graduation. I was sitting on the bench, day dreaming about college life. Then, a chubby girl run towards me.

"Don't running Deb, how many time I should say that you can't run."

"Don't you dare.....!!!", she looked like getting angry.

"Okay okay, what's up?"

"We need to talk, Boss. Let’s take a walk”

I stood up and followed her steps.

"About what? You have loosen your weight? Oh thanks God, finally"

"Hell you! I am being serious! Our proposal was rejected!"

"WHAT?!!" I shouted involuntarily.

"They say that we can't take 11 and 10 grader with us because they have to stay until the final exam report being issued."

"But they have no class anymore, how can school not let them go with us?"

"That is ridiculous for sure. Our adviser said that the reason is they still school's responsibility. So, to keep them save, they can't go anywhere outside school area."

"But we will go with our advisers, they are teachers. In other words, we are going somewhere accompanied by teachers so school can monitoring us."

"I have said that also, but they don't accept any reason."

"So they neglect to give them freedom? It is brutal. We, 12 grader, will graduate within a month, we just want to make strong bond with our lower grade members as family of Komodo House by this trip. It has been 3 years we get along together, not only because we put in one dorm, but because we also shared everything together."

"I know, but we can't obtrude. They have absolute power of us."

This is why I don’t like this boarding school. They treated us like a primary school students. So many things prohibited. Even if you want to go outside for weekend, you have to fill the form and accompanied by supervisor. Such a freak school.

"But still, this is not acceptable! I still want this trip success no matter what"

"They said if only 12 graders who will go outside school, it does not matter. If you really want it so bad, we just make this trip for 12 graders excluding 10 and 11."

"It is pointless. I wanna go with all Komodo's member."

"Don't be so childish! How if we go to plan B?"

Oh c'mon, I don't like this idea. Okay, pretend I don't know anything.

"What is it?"

"You don't know? I had said it in our first meeting! You should listen to your Vice, Captain!"

"Oh, I am sorry Deb. I just forget"

"We will do a camping in a yard behind our dorm."

Better being honest.

"Okay, I just pretending to forget it. I am being honest, I don't like this idea. Look, it is like primary school game. You make a tent in a yard, singing goodnight songs, playing card game, what's the point?"

"Hey! Look at your trip. To a waterfall? Your idea is also childish, you just wanna have fun right?"

Damn!

"........... But, at least, we are off campus."

"There it is! Look, we can make the camp is not fun at all, such a military one. And we will be the one who make the situation! We can do games which make them suffer such as hard athletic games with punishment if you lose. Because of we are the organizer, we are not included in game. Hahaha. I know you are good to make such games, you had been in a scout team which based on military when you are in middle school, right?"

Hmmm, nice idea, I think I will have funnier time rather just go to the trip.

"I can make some games. I just wondering, you make this into camp because you really love to make our members suffer, don't you?"

"Of course, this is my revenge after 3 years they don't listen to what I said. You also want a revenge, right?"

She has the point!

"You have the point. I am in but make this a secret for the other members."

"Count on me." She leaved with a devilish smile.